Re: The story of John Lannan
Hi Hard,
Interesting start... writing in the first person, is fine, I always like to get inside a character's head, when I'm reading.
What pitches does Lannan throw?...these can make a great difference in "Player" mode
"Whate'er should be our Zodiac's star
We all are born to make or mar.
To each is gi'en a bag of tools
Some mentors, and a set of rules:
And each must carve, ere life has flown,
A stumbling block, or a stepping-stone"
(Author unknown)
Generation 35.
"Spikes" The cleats on baseball boots
"Spikes" On which newspaper editors impale copy for future reference, or ultimate destruction.